This term I have been learning multiplication strategies, here is one of them.

I am learning to plan and write a mystery narrative. I hope you enjoy.

Did you know, a few years back on an isolated hill, something terrible happened. The story goes like this. A few years ago on an isolated hill there was Jordan who was 16 years old, there was Ellah who was 13 years old and there was Stan the dad. Stan was into science, he worked for LABCO.

One day Stan went down to the basement to do some type of science experiment. During this time Jordan and Ellah played around and done fun stuff together.

About 10 hours later Stan came back from whatever he was doing. “Lets have tea, i’m starving” he exclaimed. So he started to cook some steak on the stove. A few minutes later tea was served “salt anyone?” asked dad “Yes please” Jordan and Ellah both said at the same time “why aren’t you having salt?” asked Jordan. “Uum, i'm on a diet” said Stan. That’s strange, normally dad has tonnes of salt on his steak Ellah thought. After tea Jordan and Ellah both brushed their teeth and went to bed.

The next day was Stans work day when he had to go to LABCO to work. But before he went to work he said to his children “whatever you do, don’t you dare go into that basement” “but what if we need something out of there?” questioned Ellah “just don’t go in there!!!!” screamed dad and stormed off to work. “What’s in there that’s so important?!” thought Ellah aloud “no one knows, look dad didn’t even organise a baby sitter” “come lets go in, i learnt how to pick locks at school” said Ellah excitedly “but….” “come on it’d be fun” Jordan was cut off by Ellah “OK then, I suppose a few minutes couldn’t hurt.”

So down they went, picked the lock and went in. In the basement was almost lifelike plants and some kind of machine in the corner and a cupboard in the far end of the basement “Jordan, Ellah, Jordan, Ellah” whispered something from the cupboard “w-w-what was that” said Ellah with her mind swirling “let’s go have a look” said Jordan.  

So Jordan opened the cupboard and there was a person who looked just like Stan. Both of them could hear their heart pumping in their head of confusion “w-w-who are you” asked Ellah, “i’m your real dad” Stan said, “tell me about it” Jordan asked. “OK, so, when I was doing an experiment on a weight loss machine, I tested myself and it came out with a clone that murdered me and he went out to murder you guys” “oooook?” “here, take this tazor and zap him and then come back down and free me and then we’ll turn him him into compost because he’s just a plant” “ok” said Jordan.

So when clone dad came home Jordan zapped him with the tazor and then went down to the basement and freed Stan the real dad and turned fake dad into compost and used him in the garden. Then life turned back to normal and Stan promised never to test himself on newly made inventions ever again.

WALT ask and answer questions about what we want using the word ranei

Kia Kaha.This is why I am unique.I hope you enjoy my BIO poem.

                      

 

 Who is Intelligent, generous and  friendly

Son of Tony and Hinemoa, uncle of Kaysen Erueti

Who loves minecraft, playing with Kaysen, KFC, drawing and my mum’s boil up.                     

Who always feels loneliness when he’s at home and feels happy when he’s with a friend                                                       

Who fears getting stung in the neck, sounds of monsters on minecraft, Bigfoot and dolls.

Who got level 4a on an e-asttle test

Who would like to go to lego world in California

Resident of Orakau rd